Essay Perfection Program

One-on-one feedback on your practice essays and school assessments

The Essay Perfection Program (EPP) is unique to Delta and provides one-on-one feedback on your practice essays and school assessments, which are marked online by our specialist team of state-ranking markers.

How the EPP Works

Click through the numbers to see each element of our marking process

SAMPLE ESSAY
Sample Essay with Feedback
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An overall comment is provided that summarises the main strengths and weaknesses of the student’s essay. A mark is given so that the student is aware of how the essay would fare in the actual HSC marking centre.

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Feedback

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Students are encouraged to include questions, ask for advice or suggestions in their essays. Here, our student has asked rather involved question about her essay structure.

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For issues that require more attention than just a simple correction or suggestion, your marker will provide a detailed explanation that addresses your concerns. Here, our marker has explained vital concepts that are essential in high-scoring HSC English essays, and has also provided tips on exam technique to ensure the highest possible results.

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Extensive in-line additions, deletions, corrections and suggestions are made to improve the student’s writing style, articulation and flair. It’s these factors that distinguish reasonable results from spectacular results.

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Comments about the student’s approach, writing style, structure and textual analysis are made in the margins to provide holistic critique of the student’s essay, facilitating improvement towards the highest band.

SAMPLE ESSAY
Sample Essay with Feedback
01

Spotlight

epp-sample-essay-01

01

An overall comment is provided that summarises the main strengths and weaknesses of the student’s essay. A mark is given so that the student is aware of how the essay would fare in the actual HSC marking centre.

02

Spotlight

Feedback 02

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Students are encouraged to include questions, ask for advice or suggestions in their essays. Here, our student has asked rather involved question about her essay structure.

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Spotlight

Feedback 03

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For issues that require more attention than just a simple correction or suggestion, your marker will provide a detailed explanation that addresses your concerns. Here, our marker has explained vital concepts that are essential in high-scoring HSC English essays, and has also provided tips on exam technique to ensure the highest possible results.

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Spotlight

Feedback 04

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Extensive in-line additions, deletions, corrections and suggestions are made to improve the student’s writing style, articulation and flair. It’s these factors that distinguish reasonable results from spectacular results.

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Spotlight

Feedback 05

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Comments about the student’s approach, writing style, structure and textual analysis are made in the margins to provide holistic critique of the student’s essay, facilitating improvement towards the highest band.

Download Samples Here

What You Get

500 words of feedback per script minimum

Available 24/7 (including breaks & holidays)

Specialist team of state-ranking markers

Average 90-hour turn around time

Can expedite for urgent/upcoming assessments

Can accept any writing for English: essays, scaffolds, single paragraphs, comprehension tasks, creative writing, Extension 1

Two-week trial available.

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